In His World 1 – (Billionaire Contemporary Erotic Romance) Reviews

In His World 1 – (Billionaire Contemporary Erotic Romance)

In His World 1 - (Billionaire Contemporary Erotic Romance)

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After an unexpected encounter with a handsome young billionaire, an unsuspecting and innocent secretary must now suffer the devastating paybacks from his powerful and devious fiancée/business partner.

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3 thoughts on “In His World 1 – (Billionaire Contemporary Erotic Romance) Reviews

  1. Amazon Customer
    24 of 25 people found the following review helpful
    2.0 out of 5 stars
    No!, January 21, 2013
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    This review is from: In His World 1 – (Billionaire Contemporary Erotic Romance) (Kindle Edition)
    I dont even know where to begin with this. There are no real paragraphs, just sentances. This woman gets a job for a postition at a company, SHE HAS NEVER WORKED FOR. And instead of questioning why their HR department is calling her, she decides to show up for work the next day. The verbage in this story makes you want to shut down your kindle.. Her dripping hot desire cave or her loving pocket and his manly rod or they gasped as they had never gasped before. This is listed as erotic romance (um they had sex 1 time), domination (um he spanked her), BDSM Seduction Erotica ( I found NONE of the above).

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    Has potential, but the author ruins it., April 23, 2013
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    This review is from: In His World 1 – (Billionaire Contemporary Erotic Romance) (Kindle Edition)
    The premise is great – pretty girl down on her luck, supporting her sick mother, working two jobs etc. She meets the Billionaire boss while she is cleaning his office. That story line has the potential to be a winner, however the author murders the plot by having the heroine so awestruck by the hot boss that she doesn’t speak to him – yet she is madly in love with him? Then the hot boss gives her a high flying job as his Personal Assistant just because she helped him put a couple of papers in the right order? What the??? As far as he knows she could be a half wit – as they have never actually had one single conversation! If that couldn’t get any worse, the author then has the pair in rapturous love!

    I am fully aware that not too long ago a lady made a lot of money by writing a few books with a dominating billionaire boss, and a pretty naive girl who gets a fantastic job promotion. But if I have to read another half baked attempt at Fifty Shades of Grey I may get cross! I think a rewrite won’t save this.

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  3. Katrina
    13 of 13 people found the following review helpful
    2.0 out of 5 stars
    Terrible grammar!, March 27, 2013
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    This review is from: In His World 1 – (Billionaire Contemporary Erotic Romance) (Kindle Edition)
    This was was a typical romance basically following a formula. Could have been a light, sexy read but the truly awful grammar makes it unreadable. Often seemed like it was written by someone who doesn’t speak English as their first language. Might be passable with a major rewrite.

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